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A man steps into an open space at dawn, and pauses, reflecting
Then, lifting his eyes, he gazes out toward the East
While reaching for a parchment, which he places before him
And waits for an song, unsung, to come from some inner place

Soon, on a gentle breeze, comes the sweet whisper of a woman's wisdom
A soft Northern wind caresses his ear, as she speaks wondrous things
Her words ebb and flow through his mind, mingling with his own
Forming meaning within the inner places, which is then spoken

Words and shapes tumble forth, like a dream realized, onto the parchment
The page is darkened, written, forming the sweetest of love songs
Until, having sung the songs of old in a new way, he stops
Waits a moment, thoughtful, mindful, wondering, caring

Now turning to face the North, he sees inwardly that distant place
And another thought transfixes him, of passion pure and absolute delight
So he opens his mouth again, and the new thought takes form, going forth
Crossing an aeon in just a moment as if on angel wings

And for the woman then, a startling moment of love realized
For his thought showers down upon her like the finest of gold dust
Settling about her as a golden gossamer garment, caressing her
Glistening, like a ... ... kiss!
:iconiskarlata:
This is a re-write of a poem from a month ot two ago, so if it seems familiar ...
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beautiful sorry! respect
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Mood: Joy ~Zorka99 Apr 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Cool story. I like it.
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:iconiskarlata:
Hey, thanks! =D
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*Sugaree33 Mar 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Well very nice sentiment of intimacy. :)
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:iconiskarlata:
Thank you, nice of you to comment! =D
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